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Your plan sounds pretty good, although I am not familiar with "Build My Rank".
The one thing I am curious about is, how is his website? Is it technically sound (crawlable, indexable)? Does the navigation/architecture (albeit small) make sense? Is it optimized for on page keywords? Does it have a great design, and is it full of useful information that's easily digestible?
That's just my general sense, that you have a good focus on off-site seo, but just don't forget about on-site, especially when it comes to users arriving at the page and taking that action; calling, emailing, sharing or whatever it may be.
Hope that helps! Its exciting, and good luck!
-Dan
