Is my copy too keyword rich?

[keeot]

www.heartwavemedia.com - Wordpress - All in One SEO

Competitors: photonsf.com, h2video.com, corduroymedia.com, thehivestudios.org

I've spent the last week writing and tweaking my landing page copy along with my SEO page titles and descriptions.

I think I finally feel pretty good about it but I'd like your professional opinions.  Is it too keyword rich?  Does it flow naturally?  Is the voice fresh?  Do my SEO titles vary enough?

Thanks in advance for your thoughts and advice.

[TakeshiYoung]

Most of it reads fine to me, but the line "working together to provide San Francisco video production services that are truly inspired. "video production services in San Francisco" would be more natural. Google is getting smarter at understanding the meaning of content, so it's not necessary to constantly repeat your keywords over and over again in an unnatural way in your content.

As a design suggestion, I would recommend adding your contact info as well as your social media icons to the footer as well as the header. Unless people immediately know they want to contact you or follow you, they are going to consume your content first, then look for contact info. It's easier for them if that's conveniently in the footer rather than them having to scroll all the way back up to the top of the page.

[alankoen123]

Try using http://www.seocentro.com/tools/seo/keyword-density.html to determine keyword density on a page. This or other free tools are useful in providing a visual keyword cloud and the density percentages. I ran it and it would not appear to be abnormal. There is a good breadth of keywords.

Secondly, the user navigation and experience are clean and uncluttered.

Thirdly, it's generally recognized that there is no need to include the company name in the meta title tags unless the company is searched often by its name thereby having deep brand awareness. Also, check your title tags manually from time-to-time. All the best.

[Asjad]

Hey Keith,

Looking very much optimized for Home Page

• Title Tag: 66 Characters, Optimized with keyword
• Meta Description: 156 Characters, Nicely optimized with keywords
• Meta Keywords: Missing. I know Google does'nt count it but it works for Bing. So, adding them will be a plus.
• H1: Optimized
• Content: San Francisco 4 Times which is acceptable!

So overall optimized! But you need to work on your other inner pages, they need some efforts as well1

I hope, this will help!

Regards