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People SCAN the SERPs.  They don't read every single word of each and every title. So, if you want them to read yours you better make it something other than a reallylongtonguetwisterwithapipeandcaboose If I thought that most people are searchin' for "Dorothy Shoes" ... and some might include "Wizard of Oz" then I would have those in the title and not much else. You don't need "girls" because very few boys are searching.  And very few people are going to use "deluxe".  Drop the pipe and the repetition. ... and if these shoes are the "ruby slippers" you better get that in there... Dorothy Shoes: Ruby Slippers from the Wizard of Oz