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[AlabuSkinCare]

Hi Folks,

I'm pretty new to SEO, I just updated our home page (http://alabu.com) to have some actual content (used to be just product images basically). Anyway, I'm trying to optimize for the term natural skin care products (and some variations on it), as well as goat milk soap a little (actually going to optimize a category page for goat milk soap, but since it's our flagship product I'm putting it on the homepage as well.

Any feedback, opinions, advice, criticism, etc would be greatly appreciated. Let me know what you think.

Thanks!

Hal

[KevinBudzynski]

Hello,

A couple items just by taking a fast look:

-Free shipping should be a smaller graphic in the header (as currently pushes content below the fold)
-Would probably have a slideshow highlighting each of the photos where a customer could click to find more info (Passionate about skin, natural & customer service). Just seems to wordy for home page.

Good luck!

[Unity]

Hi Hal,

I like your site! On a quick review here are a couple of things you should consider doing:

1. Your

   and

   headers don't contain your target keyword and they really should.

2. You don't use alt tag for images and you could. Just add 2-3 keyword targeted words to each.

3. Your logo uses the brand name as the alt tag, you should add the keyword in here as well.

4. Build quality links to your website from relevant websites.

Davinia

[AlabuSkinCare]

Thanks for the feedback folks! I really appreciate it.

Hal