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    • NadiaFL
      NadiaFL last edited by

      Please help me with the tagline:

      Option 1:

      Oasis of the Seas and Allure of the Seas Real Cruise Expert

      Option 2:

      Book Oasis of the Seas and Allure of the Seas with a Real
      Cruise Expert

      Option 3:

      No. 1 Cruise Expert: Oasis of the Seas and Allure of the
      Seas

      Web page title:

      Oasis of the Seas and Allure of the Seas

      http://oasisoftheseasallureoftheseas.com/

      Thank you!

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      • deltasystems
        deltasystems last edited by

        All seem wordy to me.

        I personally don't like duplicating a phrase more than once in titles. The SEOmoz suggestion bot does say to include the keyword phrase in the title, but in your case I would shorten it to make sense somehow. Oasis and Allure of The Seas  or a variation would have my preference.

        In addition I would work in a call to action into the title so users viewing the SERP feel compelled to click your listing. I would focus on discount related words, and also use consultant or planner in place of expert. Anyone that calls themselves an expert automatically trips my BS alarm.

        Good luck 🙂

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        • NadiaFL
          NadiaFL @deltasystems last edited by

          Thank you Zackary! But I am a real cruise expert with all certificates. I don't know how to promote myself in better way.

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          • deltasystems
            deltasystems @NadiaFL last edited by

            That's great! I just wanted to let you know I'd personally be wary of clicking a listing in Google with the word 'expert' in the title. I'd mention certification in the title, personally.

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            • NadiaFL
              NadiaFL @NadiaFL last edited by

              Great! What is your opinion for the title?

              Oasis and Allure of the Seas Certified Cruise Expert

              It sounds too long?

              Thank you for advice!

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